The diagnosis for this picture is mainly artistic issues. This was poorly composed. The rose should not have been leaning on a full bottle of Sprite. The treatment is to choose a better background, maybe a nature background would have been better. Another suggestion is to back up and straighten out the camera. The shadow effect and idea of the rose dying is good, but it wasnt carried out very well. The photo is a little dark but if the shadow is to be kept then this exposure is alright. On the other hand, if i had a lamp, I would place it off to the side, out of the photo to create more light and eliminate that shadow. I would take the flash off and use the light from the lamp only. Another suggestion is to take the lampshade off to get more light and if the lampshade cant be removed then tilt it up toward the subject. The area and props for the rose are not the best though.
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